Look VS. See

Example of LOOK:
(A Homemade Birthday Cake)

A birthday cake with sunshine yellow, red and orange batter.
Round with snow-white frosting, decorated with little stars.
Prep and baking time the same – both take half an hour.
Mother placed it on a platter. Happy Birthday, Mark.

Example of SEE:
(A Labour of Love)

A birthday cake with sunshine yellow, red and orange batter;
The hues of fire for her fiery one, not that it mattered.
Snow-white frosting because the winter was his favorite tune,
Even though he was a summer child, born in early June.
Little star confetti sprinkles for her little son
Would have to do, she can’t fly into space to grab real ones.
Prep and baking time the same – both took half an hour.
Mother placed it on a platter.
Happy birthday, Mark.